If you want to act like He-Man, grab a sword and stand on the peak of one the mountains in Valua then stick your sword into the sky screaming "I HAVE THE POWER!!".Then get struck by lightning just like He-Man.
its the big new game!!its coming soon!!!why wont they put it up on the site!!!
ITS RETRAQUEST,THE ALL NEW GAME FROM WAVEDUDE CORP.!!
LIVE ADVENTURE!LIVE RPG!LIVE LITTLE SMILEY!
ITS ALL COMING HERE!
retraquest is going to be the bid game out for this year,i garentee!!
compete with other players for score and glory!defete the evil boss guy!
and live your life as a retro citizen!!
RETRAQUEST!! COMING SOON!!
Last edited by 962 on Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:01 pm, edited 3 times in total.
its the big new game!!its coming soon!!!why wont they put it up on the site!!!
ITS RETRAQUEST,THE ALL NEW GAME FROM WAVEDUDE CORP.!!
LIVE ADVENTURE!LIVE RPG!LIVE LITTLE SMILEY!
ITS ALL COMING HERE!
retraquest is going to be the bid game out for this year,i garentee!!
compete with other players for score and glory!defete the evil boss guy!
and live your life as a retro citizen!!
RETRAQUEST!! COMING SOON!!
Wow. Apologies for what I am about to do, but I like coherency. Correction notes in italics.
Cirrial wrote:(This is a preview)
It's (Lack of capital letter and apostrophe)the big new game! (Exclamation mark overusage and space afterwards) It's coming soon! Why won't they put it up on the site? (Exclamation mark instead of question mark) It's RetraQuest, the all new game from Wavedude Corporation! (Nothing wrong with abbreviation, but the .! looked so wrong)
Live adventure! Live RPG! Live little smiley!
It's all coming here! (This whole bit was in unnecessary capitals. Use bold for emphasis instead)
RetraQuest is going to be the big ("Bid" becomes "big", spelling error) game out for this year, I guarantee!
Compete with other players for score and glory! Defeat the evil boss guy!
Live ("and" after an exclamation mark? I don't think so) your life as a retro citizen!
RETRAQUEST!! COMING SOON!! (This bit I have no problem with)
So let's see... I give you 6/10 for usage of English. Not terrible, but not terribly good. Aha ha... I really need to be funnier. I give myself 2/10 for this particular post - utterly useless, but was it worth clicking the post button? You decide.
WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!ARE YOU A TEACHER OR SOMTHING!!!??
READ MY NAME {wave,dude}
wave as in im not a big fat geek that sits playing games all day but rides waves!(some times i sit and play games,but not all the time
dude as in IM A DUDE!!i skatebord,surf and do a hole lot of stuff that most members of Z2 dont do!!
so why in the world are you trying to be mister grammer geek,plus,your topic of this forum dosnt even go along with with it at all.
(sorry if i afended you computer head people at all)
Speak ENGLISH. And I mean using YOU instead of U. The majority of us are american or british meaning we know this wonderful language. FSFunky is DUTCH. He speaks GIBBERISH. I don't want him to speak english better than somebody like you who's been speaking it for pretty much your whole life. This is in the rules actually and I suggest you follow it. Don't think if you misuse you're and your you'll be banned, but it does make you look less than intellectual. Even I fuck up sometimes but I tend to notice right away and cover up before it's too late! That's what the edit button is for. Don't be ashamed of editing your posts, everyone does it.
