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"speed lines" more like LINES IMPLYING THE WIND IS BLOWING THAT WAY.

I congratulate nadir for not using that damn shading technique on everything in the picture.

My suggestion is to have a happy character because they always look like they're about to kill somebody for calling them furry.
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yeah the cross-hatching was sloppy and distracting and took too long so i ditched it

i don't draw happy eyes real well though i guess

i do angry, apathetic, cynical and mildly amused well, but not happy <:(
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"You're alive," said the maker, and smiled at the aardvark.

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<gbelo> Wanna yiff.
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Post by Dr. Dos »

you should be like this:

:dance: :frostyangel: :sex: :jump: :patriot: :rainbow: :hippy: \m/

but nadir chooses to be like this:

:emo: :freddy: :headbang: :mgwhore: :tie: :slavedriver: :gay: :icannotcontrol: :drussrox: :vedick: :adomisfreewareyoudontneedacrackorserialnumbertopl Zaphod :out: :meow:
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The :meow: at the end of that is awesome, it's like the punchline because it was so out of place. Like :learn: was before we got all these new icons to go with it.
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Dr. Dos wrote:My suggestion is to have a happy character because they always look like they're about to kill somebody for calling them furry.
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Post by Homz »

I'm no great critic, but it looks good, if a tad stiff. It reminds me in some ways of Jeff Smith's style, if only in the clean line sort of drawing style.

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Ryan Ferneau wrote:I am asparagus! I shout!
Hey nadir is a LIAR. HE CAN DRAW HAPPY THINGS. THERE IS HOPE YET.

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Well, I guess that's supposed to be happy, but the facial expressions on that furry aren't exactly showing the "WHEEE!" he/she is saying.
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Post by Stak »

That is pretty good

I can't really critique though because I am by no means an artist
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Post by Ryan Ferneau »

Zenith Nadir wrote:well you see

there is a tree

there are fallen leaves on the ground by the tree, denoting the time of year (ie. autumn). there is also ivy on the tree and some toadstools at its base

beyond the tree is a hedge and another tree, and beyond that there is a lake

on the banks of the lake there are some willow trees, and in the middle of the lake is a small island, and on the island there are some more trees

on the far side of the lake is a forest, and beyond that is a large mountain range

also there is a picture of penny in the foreground wearing a coat and scarf, walking and maybe thinking about something

these same garments are blowing in the wind because it is windy (symbolised by the wavy lines)

penny is the same penny from that one game i did, but she has different hair because she's older and the only people who keep the same hairstyle for five years straight are big dorks

are we all on the same page now????????????? i sure hope so
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Wait, we're no longer on the same page; we're on Page 2!
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Post by Zenith Nadir »

also funky stop calling mist a furry you cock

i should have given him those goddamn happy anime eyes though i guess

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Zenith Nadir wrote:also funky stop calling mist a furry you cock

i should have given him those goddamn happy anime eyes though i guess

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