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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 12:27 am
by Dr. Dos
"speed lines" more like LINES IMPLYING THE WIND IS BLOWING THAT WAY.

I congratulate nadir for not using that damn shading technique on everything in the picture.

My suggestion is to have a happy character because they always look like they're about to kill somebody for calling them furry.

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 1:15 am
by Zenith Nadir
yeah the cross-hatching was sloppy and distracting and took too long so i ditched it

i don't draw happy eyes real well though i guess

i do angry, apathetic, cynical and mildly amused well, but not happy <:(

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 2:17 am
by Kjorteo
:icannotcontrol:

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 2:45 am
by Dr. Dos
you should be like this:

:dance: :frostyangel: :sex: :jump: :patriot: :rainbow: :hippy: \m/

but nadir chooses to be like this:

:emo: :freddy: :headbang: :mgwhore: :tie: :slavedriver: :gay: :icannotcontrol: :drussrox: :vedick: :adomisfreewareyoudontneedacrackorserialnumbertopl Zaphod :out: :meow:

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 3:13 am
by Kjorteo
The :meow: at the end of that is awesome, it's like the punchline because it was so out of place. Like :learn: was before we got all these new icons to go with it.

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 3:35 am
by Ryan Ferneau
Dr. Dos wrote:My suggestion is to have a happy character because they always look like they're about to kill somebody for calling them furry.
I am asparagus! I shout!

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 5:53 pm
by Homz
I'm no great critic, but it looks good, if a tad stiff. It reminds me in some ways of Jeff Smith's style, if only in the clean line sort of drawing style.

Drawing is a great time waster.

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 6:19 pm
by Dr. Dos
Ryan Ferneau wrote:I am asparagus! I shout!
Hey nadir is a LIAR. HE CAN DRAW HAPPY THINGS. THERE IS HOPE YET.

Image

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:03 pm
by FSFunky
Well, I guess that's supposed to be happy, but the facial expressions on that furry aren't exactly showing the "WHEEE!" he/she is saying.

Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:46 pm
by Stak
That is pretty good

I can't really critique though because I am by no means an artist

Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 12:41 am
by Ryan Ferneau
Zenith Nadir wrote:well you see

there is a tree

there are fallen leaves on the ground by the tree, denoting the time of year (ie. autumn). there is also ivy on the tree and some toadstools at its base

beyond the tree is a hedge and another tree, and beyond that there is a lake

on the banks of the lake there are some willow trees, and in the middle of the lake is a small island, and on the island there are some more trees

on the far side of the lake is a forest, and beyond that is a large mountain range

also there is a picture of penny in the foreground wearing a coat and scarf, walking and maybe thinking about something

these same garments are blowing in the wind because it is windy (symbolised by the wavy lines)

penny is the same penny from that one game i did, but she has different hair because she's older and the only people who keep the same hairstyle for five years straight are big dorks

are we all on the same page now????????????? i sure hope so
Okay, well, to me it just looked like Shroomland.

Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 12:49 am
by Quantum P.
Wait, we're no longer on the same page; we're on Page 2!

Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 1:26 pm
by Zenith Nadir
:slap:

Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 2:51 pm
by Zenith Nadir
also funky stop calling mist a furry you cock

i should have given him those goddamn happy anime eyes though i guess

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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 3:56 pm
by FSFunky
Zenith Nadir wrote:also funky stop calling mist a furry you cock

i should have given him those goddamn happy anime eyes though i guess

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ok sorry :(

can we be friends again plz