Need some feedback on a song, please

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Need some feedback on a song, please

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Here's something new I've been working on, a little psychadelic happy hardcore stuff.

http://s31.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1JLF ... EZD8MEOR3S
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okay!!!!!! downloading now

fuck, my soundcard decided to stop working just as i opened it. i guess i'll have to reboot!
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and so he did. here is banal irc chatter about song (featuring nuero in his first major role as DRUPE\SKYBLUE)

<Nadir> it takes a little long to fade in, maybe
<Nadir> but i like it after 0:25
<Moonpie> nuero is it obvious that i'm using fruityloops in it?
<Nadir> i wasn't sure about those pipes at first, but they're used well
<drupe\skyblue> well, i didn't know it was fruityloops!
<Nadir> overall i like it
<Nadir> good work!
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Post by Swashbuckler »

Okay. Here's Beta 2!

http://s17.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2UFM ... HO72YXPGKN

Re-synced some things, added more onto the end, intense snare fills, etc.

currently working on: vocals. stay tuned!
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penis gaydir and I wrote:22.36.55 <MadTom> hey the beat/bass is awesome
22.37.06 <MadTom> it makes me nod
22.37.52 <MadTom> moonpie this is good
22.38.16 <Nadir> i thought so
22.38.53 <MadTom> moonpie privmsg
22.39.10 <Nadir> privmsg
22.39.18 <Nadir> p r i v m s g
22.39.26 <MadTom> gsmvirp
22.39.40 <Nadir> NORMAL people say "pm" or maybe "query"
22.39.44 <Nadir> but not madtom
22.39.52 <MadTom> i am raging against the machine
22.39.50 <Nadir> now he's a lunix nerd
22.39.58 <MadTom> i am not!!!
22.40.00 <Nadir> yes
22.40.01 <MadTom> how dare you!!!
22.40.22 <MadTom> i'll h4x u with shell scripts
22.40.32 <MadTom> ur on m$ winblows
22.40.34 <MadTom> LOL
22.40.38 <MadTom> have a nice bsod mofo
22.41.05 <Nadir> u = captain fagdick
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wow, thanks a lot, madtom! i'm starting to get pretty good with fruityloops, i guess ;)
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Post by http://yahoo.com/ »

oom pah oom pah

it's like if the oompah loompahs did a show in china

with a BUBBLE MACHINE

and the first measure of those pipes sounded like a lord of the rings riff

also the ending sounds like a ddr song

that is all

it was pretty good but a bit repetitive
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Post by Swashbuckler »

Okay, guys! I've got another song that I need a little review on.

Once I start hitting the good stuff, I'll work on an album!

http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0C9B ... 69P3IRUTJA

This one is a little dance, jungle, drumn'bass.
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